
Hi SErs! It’s a day of Harmony here at Story Empire 🙂 Today, I’d like to talk about whether or not your story needs a prologue. Here’s a link to the previous post on Prologue Dos and Don’ts
So far in this post series we’ve looked at what a prologue is and isn’t and also what to do and not to do when using a prologue. How, you might ask, do you decide whether or not you need a prologue in the first place?
Why Do You Need a Prologue?
- A well-written prologue can add power to your main narrative
- If you want to foreshadow events to come, a prologue will help you to do that to good effect
- If you want to let your reader be privy to information the characters are unaware of, then a prologue will be a useful tool
- If you need to impart vital information to your reader before the main story begins, then you need a prologue
- If you need to show events from a unique point of view, then a prologue will be useful. Usually, this point of view won’t appear again in the narrative, but the events will be revisited or referenced from your main character’s perspective
- If you want to set the feel or tone of the story, then a prologue could be useful (however, see point 1 below …)
- If you need to give information to your reader about the conflict, world, inciting incident, or time period, then a prologue will help you to do that to good effect
Why Don’t You Need a Prologue?
- If your prologue can be woven into the body of your story then you don’t need one
Don’t you love how short the reasoning for not using a prologue is?! Keeps it nice and simple 🙂
TOP TIP: When you write a good prologue, and have a valid reason for using one, it will enhance your story rather than detract from it.
Remember: There are NO hard-and-fast rules. You can do anything you want, as long as you do it well and with good reason.
That’s it from me today. I hope you’ll find this series of posts useful. I’ll see you again on Friday 29th July, when we’ll take a look at Backstory Delivery via Prologues 🙂

The prologue series so far:
Part Two, What a Prologue Is and Isn’t
Part Three, Prologue Dos and Don’ts
©2022 Harmony Kent
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So long as you do it well and with good reason. Words that will stay with me,, thanks
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That’s great! Thanks, Esther 💕🙂
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Hi Harmony, it is interesting that I should find this post today. Yesterday, I was looking through Stephen King’s Salem’s Lot and I noticed he used a prologue. It worked well for that book and certainly worked well as a hook for that book. Another great example of a most excellent prologue is in H.G. Wells War of the Worlds. Who hasn’t heard: No one would have believed in the early years of the 21st century that our world was being watched by intelligences greater than our own. That as men busied themselves about their various concerns, they observed and studied, the way a man with a microscope might observe the creatures that swarm and multiply in a drop of water. With infinite complacency, men went to and fro about the globe, confident of our empire over this world. Yet across the gulf of space, intellects vast and cool and unsympathetic regarded our planet with envious eyes, and slowly, and surely, drew their plans against us.
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For certain! That stuff fascinates me 😁 I’m rereading Tess Gerritsen from 2001 and so far up to 2003, and all so far have prologues, which set up the main stories brilliantly. So many books nowadays have prologues, but not titled that way. They try and hide it as a body of text on its own with no header or anything. Which annoys me, lols. If it walks like a duck, quacks like a duck …
Thanks, Robbie! 💕🙂
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Haha, Harmony, you are right about that.
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Great series Harmony. Thank you ❤
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Thanks, Debby. You’re so welcome! 💕🙂
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Great post, Harmony. Love rule 1.
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Me too! 😁 Thanks, Michele 💕🙂
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Grrat post, Harmony 🙂 Good information for using a prologue and I liked the reason not to .
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, Denise 💕🙂
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It’s a great and very useful overview, when to use a prologue. Thanks for your efforts, showing this so clear and simple, Harmony! Best wishes, Michael
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You’re so welcome! Thanks, Michael 💕🙂
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Thanks for sharing, Michael 💕🙂
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Excellent points, Harmony! Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks, Bette! 💕🙂
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Another good look at when to use a prologue and an excellent rule for not using. Well done, Harmony!
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Thanks so much, Mae! 💕🙂
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Some great information about the purpose of a prolog and when to skip it entirely.
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That’s great. Thanks, Craig 💕🙂
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Another fantastic teaching post by author Harmony Kent!
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Thanks so much for sharing, Beem! 💕🙂
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A fine post, Harmony. I love the way you break it down into its simplest elements.
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Thanks so much, Beem! 💕🙂
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Ooh, you’ve made me love prologues even more! Yay/! But I get it. You have to do prologues right.
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Yay! That’s great, Judi! 💕🙂
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Another great post, Harmony. You’ve helped me better understand the pluses and potential minuses of Prologues. This is an excellent guide! 😊
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Fantastic. Thanks, Gwen! 💕🙂
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A super post, Harmony. Well done. Love reason 1 for not needing a prologue.
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Lols 😉Thanks, John 💕🙂
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Excellent post, Harmony. All great reasons to use one, and one great reason not to! I love how concise this is. Every writer who’s ever considered a prolog should keep this in their back pocket. 🙂
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Fantastic! Thanks so much, Diana. Have a wonderful weekend 💕🙂
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🙂 You too!
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Love your spirited defense of the prologue, Harmony. Usually, the knee-jerk article is ‘get rid of it’. You remind us why that might not be good advice.
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Thanks, Jacqui. I think prologues have a bad rep because they’ve been so misused. Have a wonderful weekend 💕🙂
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This has been a helpful series, Harmony. I struggled with whether or not to include one, but my decision to include a prologue checks the boxes next to a couple of your top list. Thanks so much for these posts.
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That’s so lovely to know. Thanks, Dan. Have a wonderful weekend 💕🙂
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An excellent post! And I love how you said it was a day of Harmony at SE. 🙂 YES!!! Breaking it all down to one rule of why you don’t need a prologue is brilliant! Great series!
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Thanks so much, Jan! So thrilled you’re enjoying the post series. 💕🙂
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If you can distill a concept down to one rule, there’s no reason to violate it. Nicely done, Harmz.
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For sure! Thanks, Staci 💕🙂
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Thanks for sharing, Jeanne. Have a wonderful weekend 💕🙂
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You’re welcome. Have a good weekend 😊
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Great rules to follow, Harmony! Yes, I liked your argument against using a prologue. 🙂
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Lols! 😉 Thanks, Jill. Have a wonderful weekend 💕🙂
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A simple rule to follow, and great suggestions on when to use a prologue. Thanks, Harmony!
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The simplicity of when not to use a prologue did have me giggling, lol. Thanks, Joan 💕🙂
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Some great suggestions for using a prologue and a most excellent reason for not using one! Many thanks, Harmony! x
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Thanks,Trish. Have a wonderful weekend 💕🙂
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Thanks for sharing, Chris. Have a wonderful weekend 💕🙂
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You too, Harmony 🤗❤️🤗
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