Ciao, SEers. I’m going to round out my posts for the year with a discussion of literary elements and how they interact. There are probably as many opinions of the number of literary elements as there are authors who use them, but I’m going to focus on three in particular that work in tandem to strengthen a story—theme, subject, and symbolism.
Today, we’re going to talk about theme.
I’ve heard a lot of authors say “theme” is for literary fiction, not genre fiction, so they don’t consider it when they write. I’ve heard many others say they wait until they’re done with their story before even looking for their theme.
I maintain all fiction has a theme, and all authors have it in mind when they set out to tell a story (even if they don’t know it).
First, what is theme?
Theme (as it relates to fiction) is the ultimate message the writer wants to share with the reader. That’s it. People tend to complicate it and think it’s more complex or more high-brow (which is why some say theme is only for “literary” novels), but it really is that simple. It’s the point of the story in its most generalized terms.
Every story has a message, so every story has a theme. At their most basic, some examples are:
- romance says love conquers all
- legal fiction says crime doesn’t pay
- war stories say good always triumphs over evil
- sci-fi says humans are better than technology
If you can debate something, you can have that as a theme. If you’re looking for a theme to write about, consider headlines in the news:
- life sentence versus capital punishment
- NRA versus gun control
- pro-life versus pro-choice
- conservative versus liberal
It doesn’t matter what your stance is on these issues. It doesn’t even matter if you can prove one side right and the other wrong. Your stance on those issues becomes the theme of your story. For example, if you believe in capital punishment, your theme is justice above all. If you don’t believe in capital punishment, your theme is life is sacrosanct.
Let’s look at a popular use of theme in fiction. Take, for example, The Wizard of Oz. In its most general sense, the message the author is trying to impart is to always chase your heart’s desire. It’s a theme that could be portrayed in any number of genres in any number of ways. This isn’t about the vehicle through which you deliver your message. It’s merely about the message itself.
So, whatever you want your readers to come away believing (or at least thinking about), that is your theme. And in my following posts, we’ll discuss how theme relates to subject and symbolism.
Until then, do you believe you write a theme in every story? Do you think about theme before or during the writing process? Let’s talk about it.
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Another informative post, Staci. The examples are always welcome illustrations of your point. I’m developing my next story, so your timing is spot on. 🙂
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I learn best with examples, and I found my students did, too, so I try to remember to include them here. I’m glad you found this post timely. Thanks, Diana.
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Thanks for sharing, Staci. Knowing your theme is important for memoir writers too.
It’s one of the key literary devices that help to hold a story together.
I don’t always know my theme at the start of writing – it becomes clear to me as I go along. But I wish I were disciplined enough to force myself to identify it going in.
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I would imagine it’s very important for memoir writers. That’s a genre I’d never have the courage to tackle. It’s great that you find your theme as you write. Thanks, Cynthia.
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Great article Staci. As a nonfiction writer, my theme is always clear which begins the inspiration for my stories. 🙂
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I love that you use theme as your inspiration. I’ve never tried that. I don’t know if it’d find it fun or frustrating.
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I think it may be a different game for nonfiction. 🙂
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It could be. I’m probably not the person to weigh in. The only nonfiction I write is user manuals. And blog posts. 🙂
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I don’t think I have a theme in mind when I set out to write. I usually come to it at the end once I have finish. Great post, Staci.
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It’s kind of fun to get to the end and see what it was your subconscious was burning to say, isn’t it? Thanks, Michele.
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Great post. I don’t have the theme fixed in my head in advance but the resolution at the end of the novel brings one to the fore and I can see retrospectively how important it’s been to the development of both characters and plot.
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I think that’s how a lot of writers find their theme, and there’s nothing wrong with that. (That’s how I come to it more often than not, myself.) It’s astonishing how the theme shapes the characters without us even noticing, isn’t it?
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I tend to unwittingly put a theme in. I’m writing away, making my story, then I write something near the end and say “oh wow, this ties in with something earlier in an unexpected way and makes an underlying theme!” I’m sure if I planned a theme it wouldn’t come off well!
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I love those happy surprises. Makes me wonder if I tried to plan a theme so carefully, if it would work out nearly so well. I guess our subconscious minds know what they’re doing. Thanks, Jessica.
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Hahaha! That’s the first time I’ve ever thought of my subconscious mind actually knowing what it’s doing!
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I have faith in you.
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I find myself thinking about theme more, the more books I write. I discovered my theme – nature v nurture – while writing the first in my series, and since then I’ve been more conscious of it and explored it more thoroughly in each subsequent book. It’s taken my characters in some fascinating directions and, I believe, added depth to my action-adventure fantasy tales, well beyond the superficial.
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I think that’s fabulous that you found your theme and now you’re nurturing it. Nothing excites me more than adding depth to my work and seeing each book improve. It’s so thrilling to see other writers say they feel the same and are seeing similar results. Kudos to you!
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Great topic, Staci! I don’t think about themes ahead of time. I just write, but as other authors have mentioned, the theme is always there somewhere. 🙂
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I haven’t pre-considered theme since college. But it ends up in there, all the same. It’s almost magical that it happens that way. I love that about writing.
Thanks, Yvette.
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Staci Troilo is starting a great new series on Story Empire about Literary Elements. This first post focuses on Theme, and how it relates to fiction. I think you’ll really enjoy checking out her breakdown and hope you’ll consider sharing it on your social media so other writers can learn more about this topic, too. Thanks, and thanks to Staci for another great post! 🙂
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Thanks, Marcia.
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I never really gave it much thought, but it seems to come out eventually. I want readers to have a good time and not preach at them. I danced pretty close to that line in Grinders, but don’t think I crossed it.
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I think if readers look for it, they find it. If they don’t (and writers aren’t preachy), it’s subliminal. You didn’t cross the line in Grinders. Thanks, Craig.
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Much appreciated. 🙂
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I don’t consciously think about theme before I start a book, but things that are important to me seep into the stories. And since I write mysteries, there’s always the general theme of justice, that taking a life deserves to be punished. Great post today. You always make me think!
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Yeah, mysteries are kind of easy. So are romances. We almost don’t have to think about those. But I’m really glad I made you think about the concept! Thanks, Judi.
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What a great topic today, Staci! For me, the theme comes together in the creation of the story, but it’s always there. For example, in my second book which is set inside Leavenworth prison, the theme didn’t turn out to be about how horrible prison is or how crime doesn’t pay, but how one man made the decision to be, think and do only positive in a negative situation. That’s my theme – making lemonade out of lemons. But when I was writing it, I didn’t really know that. So, for me, the theme comes as I write. Great discussion! Thank you for sharing!
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I think there are two kinds of writers: those who know their theme and craft a story to explore it and those who have a story to tell then realize they told it to explore a them. Either way, the theme is in there. I love your take on the prison story; it’s fresh. Thanks for sharing.
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Hi Staci, I think a great deal about the themes of my books and they all have them, even the children’s books. Maybe I should be writing literary fiction, something for me to think about. Anyhow, these are the themes I wrote about in A Ghost and His Gold:
The impact of greed and corruption on countries and people;
Bad decision making and their effect on soldiers and civilians;
Evil perpetuating the development of hatred and evil;
The effect of war on the political and social development of a country;
The individual mindset versus the group mentality including pro-war propaganda;
Death; and
The reality of war.
An intriguing topic today. I think themes make a book relevant into the future.
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I love that you put thought into theme(s) before you wrote your book. And that there are so many of them. I agree; themes make books relevant into the future. Without them, they’re just trendy topics that fizzle out quickly. (Maybe that’s why I enjoy history.) Thanks so much for sharing, Robbie.
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Excellent topic, Staci. I think theme is important. It’s the emotional thread that drives characters to pursue their goals. James Scott Bell advocates for writers to interview their characters to learn what’s important to them. By doing so, we know them as well as ourselves. Thus, we can choose a theme that’s important to them, even if it conflicts with our own beliefs.
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I devour his craft books. He’s brilliant. Thanks for sharing that, Sue.
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I think themes can naturally turn up just by having characters evolve. I’ve never intentionally aimed for one in my stories, but I can see where a reader can see one. For example, many of my adventure stories can be said to have themes of determination and friendship. That’s simply how it turned out because I had a group of heroes and they were facing brutal conditions.
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I think (especially for pantsers, but even for plotters) sometimes themes do just evolve as we work through our stories. And particularly in adventures, determination and the power of friendship are probably strong and common themes. Thanks, Charles.
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Makes them more natural too. I think certain themes, especially character-focused, can come off forced if you push too hard.
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I agree. I almost always prefer subtle over overt.
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I don’t always think about theme, but it’s there. In two of my books, however, I was fully focused on theme before I started writing. Both Eclipse Lake and Myth and Magic are about the power of redemption. That is a message and a theme I love.
An informative post today, Staci!
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Ah, redemption. That’s a great theme. One of my favorite books of all time (A Tale of Two Cities) explores it masterfully. You handled it beautifully in both of your works. Thanks, Mae.
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Much appreciated, Charles.
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You’re welcome.
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I spend more time on the theme than any other element when thinking about what the storyline should be. That’s why I write the last three lines first to cement the theme into both my mind and the story arc. Super post today, Staci
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That’s fantastic, John. I love to hear about processes, especially when they’re so different from mine. Thanks for sharing.
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Great post, Staci. I tend to think we live our message and for writers, that message finds a way onto paper. The theme may vary, but one way or another, it’s part of us. It’s this very fact that draws me to reading fiction or memoirs.
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I love that thought—that we live our message and it finds its way onto the page. Thanks for sharing that, Gwen.
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I like to think about the theme when starting a new story. I try to avoid those controversial topics, especially these days. I don’t want to bring my worries into my story world. 🙂 Great post, Staci!
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I know. I tend to steer clear of the hot topics, too. They were just easy for demonstrative purposes. I think it’s great that you consider theme from the beginning, though. So many writers don’t. ( ✋ Guilty!) I admit, I usually don’t. I haven’t since college. I usually let it sort itself out as I compose. Thanks, Jill.
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I hadn’t thought about it before, but yes, I believe there is an underlying theme in all stories. Looking back at my books, there is one. Some readers may not pick up on it, but it’s there. Great post, Staci. Looking forward to the next one.
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When I was in college, the professors pretty much drilled it into our heads. But they focused on literary fiction, of course. I’m of the belief it’s even in children’s books. No… ESPECIALLY in kid lit. Glad you liked the post, Joan.
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Definitely in kid lit!
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I hadn’t thought too much about theme until I wrote FALLOUT. But after that, when I look back at my earlier books, I can see that theme was present, just that I wasn’t as acutely aware of it. I agree that every story has a theme … whether that’s overt or covert. Great post, Staci 🙂
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In the end, I think that’s probably why we write to begin with. To explore a theme. We just might not realize it. I love that you looked back over your work and found that. Thanks, Harmony.
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Thanks for the reblog.
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I always think that theme is the reason the plot wheels turn, and where these wheels go is entirely in the hands of the writer…
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Oh, I like that! Very aptly phrased.
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Thank you, Joan!
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I love that. Like Joan said, you phrased it beautifully.
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What a lovely thing to say…
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